Love in life awaits a lucky chance
For sure, it knocks the heart's door atleast once
One waits for the bell to stike in despair
Loosing all the transparent sight in the air
Love is in thickest of its form everywhere
In air, in the lovely breeze, and in every particle of life
Nevertheless the rays of it elude, leaving me in strife.
PS: Apunke Chinky ke liye intezaar kartha hua...ek munna bahi :)
7 comments:
Hey this is Ashok r u Pavan from GIOE was just browsing through some random blogs and happened to stop by at your's and felt ur details to be similar to a friend of mine.
So did the love bell rang in your life, you are quite good at your love poems:)
Thanks pal!
I am not able to find a link between us. Please drop in an orkut scrap if you are doubly sure i am not getting you :).
Hey!! this is awesome....really good...hmmm..so u found ur Chinki?? lol
hi that's good post,nice blog,this is naresh from nandyal,hope u remember me,happy friendship day,bye
hey naresh! i definitely remember you. please drop your email id next time you see my comment here. happy friendship day to you too!
Hey Nice poem, are you not blogging these days ? They say thoghts become words... words become actions... you write poems about love, and it's dated sep-2008so, is the coffee still brewing since one year ?
Thanks for visiting my blog. I liked your idea of visting others blogs and making them visit mine. But in future I want to write something really good so that poeple will visit on their own ...not because I visit their blogs.. I don't know when that will happen.. but thats how I want it to be.
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